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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Love your dialogue!!

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Walt Shuler's avatar

I appreciate that! I always worry that it won’t come across quite right.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

So far, so good!

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Ed the Editor's avatar

Keeping with my theme of using Firefly as my visuals for the crew, Feeney is the guy from firefly that owns the business at the docks. Badger. All proper like.

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Walt Shuler's avatar

I actually have a whole mood board with inspiration pics from Pinterest for the crew. I might share those as a behind-the-scenes post at some point.

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Ed the Editor's avatar

Ooh, that would be great. Helps me keep track of this many people lol. I'm just a guy writing about a loner in an apocalypse 😂

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Walt Shuler's avatar

I did see him as a lot like Badger in my head, although he's a different breed ultimately.

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RM Greta's avatar

I second the dialogue comment!

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Walt Shuler's avatar

I guess this is one of the few times that hearing voices in your head is a good thing? 😉

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RM Greta's avatar

Always love the inn scenes. There's something about imagining walking into a dark or busy or quiet inn. Good flow to this. Very curious about the thieves den.

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Walt Shuler's avatar

Same! They’re some of my favorite settings.

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Rosie B's avatar

Oooh that last line! So true. I agree with Leanne- excellent dialogue!

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Walt Shuler's avatar

Thank you so much!

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