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RM Greta's avatar

Big trouble! Of course that guy is such a snake.

Walt Shuler's avatar

He really is a slimeball.

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Eeeee! Tell me he ducked!

Walt Shuler's avatar

I can tell you in all honesty that... you'll have to wait and see ;) And it will be a chapter or 2 before we come back to Mac. In the next one, we find out who's getting handsy with Kye!

Gil Nobodi's avatar

The cliffhanger, how dare you! Lol great chapter!

Walt Shuler's avatar

Thank you! I promise the next chapter does not end in a cliffhanger. But there may or may not be a couple of others in the rest of the book 😈

Gil Nobodi's avatar

They are really good, I want to know what happens, but I'm not actively uncomfortable with a lack of plot. Excellently played.

Hylia Corvidae's avatar

Damn two chapters back to back and both cliffhangers! Can’t wait to see what happens next 😁

Walt Shuler's avatar

The next chapter calms things down a little bit, so you'll get some breathing space :) But it also introduces some new complications.