9 Comments
User's avatar
RM Greta's avatar

I see what you mean about this being the point of no return. As someone who hates small spaces, this scene with the darkness and the impending sinking of the ship made me anxious. I was genuinely scared. Loved it!

Walt Shuler's avatar

This one was interesting to write, as well. I'm really glad all the closeness and anxiousness came through! It's not the last time Kye will be in a tight spot, either 😅

Ed the Editor's avatar

Yeah, the water on the floor, the candle light. That had me feeling confined in the large hold.

Walt Shuler's avatar

🙌 I'm not sure that I should feel so happy about making people feel anxious and confined, but, yay! 😅

Ed the Editor's avatar

😂 It’s a good thing

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Nooo…. Glad they got out. Kyle has magic maybe? Or is magic after Mac?? (I know, I know, stay tuned)

Walt Shuler's avatar

Definitely spoilers! You’ll have your answer in a few more chapters 😁

Ed the Editor's avatar

That was harrowing. I need a nap after that. Intense and descriptive. I’m hooked.

User's avatar
Comment removed
Sep 14
Comment removed